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girl in her mind for DA by xiaoyingchang girl in her mind for DA by xiaoyingchang
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:iconsmoothhipster:
This is a nice! picture. :heart:

The color palette is very smooth and pretty. All of them have a good hamony, what
is very important for the eye.
And great job with the backround, because I dont see any mistakes with the perspective and it has many details, like the folds of the curtains, the light coming out of the windows and the chandelier.

What I have to say about the girl, is that the proportions are right, but there is a
mistake about her face. Because she shifts her head a bit to the side, the shape of the eyes and mouth should change aswell.
Here I have the link for some examples for you: fav.me/d5bjnd1
The left hand is bigger than the other one, but the right one has the correct size.
To draw the hand in the correct size, they have to be as big as the half of the face.
Anyway, good job with the hair, the shadings and her clothes.

I hope I helped you. ^^

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:iconeunniepop:
EunniePop Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She looks so cute thinking about someting~
I wonder what it is? :)
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:iconxiaoyingchang:
xiaoyingchang Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Hehe, I know, I guess we all have that moment in our life:) 
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Yonomi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this ^_^ I love the background. I really like the colour scheme too, kind of has a golden look. Especially with the subtle glitter :D
I like her hair too. Only her eyes seem to be a little off-centre.
Well done overall :D
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:iconxiaoyingchang:
xiaoyingchang Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Thank you very much for your comment!:)
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Yonomi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :D
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Makosharkman Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
this girl reminds me of a tomboy from a Book I am writing.
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:iconxiaoyingchang:
xiaoyingchang Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Do you remember the name of the book?:)
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Makosharkman Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
yeah its called the Magical Note book and if you take request could you draw a picture base on it?
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:iconxiaoyingchang:
xiaoyingchang Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Sorry....unfortunately I don't do request! But I will definitely check it out, thank you !
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Makosharkman Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
okay then do you take comiisions then?


and do you want to hear what the story is about?
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